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Old 11-06-03, 07:49 PM   #1
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ma name is robbie aka realest aka bloodshedd

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yall gotta know ma name is realest
im also known as robbie or bloodshedd
beef any nigga that think they better n they could get very far
my rhymes are toxic n a killa jus like the virus sars
some people say ma rhymes is from another planet maybe mars
i keep it gangsta all the time, spit bare truth n batter faggots wit ma every line, sick of all these pussy ass niggaz that hide behind their nines, without it i'll brock their nose n their spine, they ain't smart up stairs, like me i'm like albert einstine
when i spit ur fucking face looks like frankinstine
spitting for fun to keep yall interested
so u can stay out of trouble n not get molested

FUCK THIS

i await a challengeeeeeee
ma warm ups are done
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Old 11-06-03, 08:35 PM   #2
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^ if u really want a challenge then I'll battle ya...could be used as a helpful tool for u to elevate...but u should come hard cuz I don't play in battles lol....and if we battle then u set it up n spit first...

as for ur verse...work on ur punchlines...and make em exist...and get rid of the simple rhymescheme...try rhyming bigger words and more of them in each line...

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Old 11-06-03, 09:08 PM   #3
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forsureeee LOL I'M JUS PUTTING SHIT UP FOR ATTENTION lol... holyy, finally, i've been waiting for a nice battle... ummm u set it up n i'll spit first howz that... we'll see if ma rhymes would meet up to ur expectations in our battle lol
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Old 11-06-03, 09:27 PM   #4
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simple punches..you should elevate 1st
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Old 11-07-03, 09:35 PM   #5
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^ iight I'll set it up w/ rules and whatnot (don't worry I make fair rules)...look out for it in the front lines..

peace
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Old 11-08-03, 11:30 PM   #6
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You need to elevate yo..no offense..but those are still amateur rhymes..but it will come over time..keep the work flowing yo..aight peace
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