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He Spits First
No crew
No hate
No d.r

iight this is ma check in both verses due b4 12noon....iight.......
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No... you spit first...... im at college doing hw....... those were the rules... ill spit after..... dont accept a challenge unless you agree

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okie dokie smokey.......................ill drop shortly............
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When I spit, you be getting pains and Imma about to end ur reign
If knowledge is power, Then U must love givin brains
Why u even gonna post a verse, cuz what I keyed’s tighter
Shit…I’m rippin his vocals out like Sigfried’s tiger
I draw my sword. Now you can find this bitch In morgues
Like art forums, this faggot is back to the drawin board
I’m about to take ya life…In fact, make it twice
Cuz If it's time to chill, I’m about to break the ice
He’s a blatant geek. I’ll never let him take the green
If he was a phone operator he couldn’t make ends meet

Your X Ecution has begun, and after a few of my punches theyll have to wire your jaw
My spits rip hard like im tearin out your vocal cords leavin ya beggin to withdraw
You remind me of a Jehovah's Witness, your gettin rejected door to door
Peeps wishin they could splatter yo brains on the floor, just can't stand you anymore
15 years old and 2500 posts, even ya mom knows your a waste of space
Spendin all your time here, but still got less flow than a car with to much bass
Stop actin all tough just cuz your avvy is a picture os a grenade
Because your scheme are simple and your punches are played
Silly faggot quit posin, we knows theres no X Ecutions to A-Wait in 7-1-8
Just go buy a donut, it'll equal ya votes - ya not gettin any like fat guys on blind dates

I Gotta Give This To Dominator. Both Verses Were Lackin'. I was Expectin' More From 2 Niggaz Wit Ova 600 Posts. Dominator's Verse Had Harder Punches. Simple As That.

Vote = Dominator

word....i thought X would come better...Sigfried line was tight....but Dominator got this because of better punches and personals...the 718 line pretty much took it....anyway...here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Vocab - Dom
Multis - Dom
Personals - Dom
RhymeScheme - Dom
Structure - X
Flow - Tie
Creativity - Dom
Complexity - Dom
Metas - Tie (both had played concepts)
Wordplay - Tie (same as above)

Dominator - 6 out of 10
X-Ecution - 1 out of 10
Tie - 3 out of 10

Overall - Dom took this mostly because of better personals...u both had kinda old wordplay.....but i think he got it because of that....nice read from u both....no hate...just a vote....

peace
4:20

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Breakdown:
Punches Dom
Multies Tie
mettas Dom
Wordplay Dom
Personals Dom

Vote Dom....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90949
I took the time now hit me up....

UPPIN X 1

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at 1st i wusent feelin' dominators verse, but it got better tha last 2 lines killed it 4$h0. tha other guy came hard also but id expect sumthn better wit a record like that.

flow-x
punchs-dom
personals-dom
closer-dom (hot)
vocab-dom

Hit this bttle up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8908#post898908

uppin
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Yo on the real.........Dom had better wordplay and he came a lot harder.......X didn't do too bad just gotta up the rhyme style and use better language.............................Dom

I think u Didn't poll on yer last vote......................