Ya Know The Rules
10 Line Max
Drop Before 10 Mins Cause I G2g ~1
You Drop First And Hurry

hit panik, a runaway cockraoch. welcoem to fear factor
cuase u abotu to get eaten and i aint pukin shit after
strung out on cigs tryin ta calm ya nerves 9battle wit va$lim)
cause you know u coudl lose to any one of these herbs
flunked outta school, cause u suck usin words
but ur good wit your mouth, unzip my pants pull it out
and suck my infected needle, hit you bitch on ya couch
i aint even tryin ta win, im jus tryin to kill you to commit another sin
stab out your eyes, u can't see my disease,
that i spit to ur lungs so u die trying to breathe

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

ooo that one line botu my infected needle, i was implying that ur bitch had aids, and u did, and then that woudl mean i did, that's really a dis to me...o well i lost again

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

Performance Inagorated rips Leave Ya Blessed Like Mormans..
Remove brain Portions Cuz Bitch Ya ..Cant" "beat... Me Like "Limp-Mastorbatin....Endurance
Beat You So Hard Got Nothin To Say Ya Jaws-clenched...
SubLime thinks his Punches is HEAVY...like a 'slim Bitches Conscience....
Im Testing This Fags Standards, you dont belong in the Thread.....
Heres your pressing Transfer. ..your Addressing-Answers, holding more "gay lines" then "Homo Repping-Banners..
Weapon-Tampered,Sublime destined to be into men more then Rectum-Cancer..
Hit'Panik Leaves This Thread Wit Homo SuBlime Shaken Like 'Gay-Private-Dancers'......

Hollaz Quick Win ~1

uppin this shit number 1................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................

opener:panik
closer:panik
wordplay:panik
structure:tie
punches:panik
overall:panik

panik owned this newb, sublime, wok on ya spellin dude



plz vote honestly on this!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4279#post914279

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panik had punches and wordplay therfore he won good battle to both emcees j/k the other guy needs to elevate good luck

openeranik
closeranik
wordplayanik
structureanik
punchesanik
overallanik

I think that panic is alot more use to writing rhymes down fast. So he pretty much told this cat he has cancer and he has 3 votes till he dies LOL. good battle, keep ya heads up.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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well nice feedback son but ^^ you need 100+posts to vote rite cause your vote don't count cause you can't poll

Sublime-

hit panik, a runaway cockraoch. welcoem to fear factor
cuase u abotu to get eaten and i aint pukin shit after
choppy flo-forced meti4-weak...

strung out on cigs tryin ta calm ya nerves 9battle wit va$lim)
cause you know u coudl lose to any one of these herb
flunked outta school, cause u suck usin words
basic-bad structure-poor vocab....

but ur good wit your mouth, unzip my pants pull it out
and suck my infected needle, hit you bitch on ya couch
why everybody go after g/f's an mother's-not direct

i aint even tryin ta win, im jus tryin to kill you to commit another sin
stab out your eyes, u can't see my disease,
that i spit to ur lungs so u die trying to breathe
last meti4 was ok wit bad wordin-coulda been decent tho-

total-1.5/10
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Hit Panik-

Performance Inagorated rips Leave Ya Blessed Like Mormans..
Remove brain Portions Cuz Bitch Ya ..Cant" "beat... Me Like "Limp-Mastorbatin....Endurance
nice multi's-good meti4-hard punch

Beat You So Hard Got Nothin To Say Ya Jaws-clenched...
SubLime thinks his Punches is HEAVY...like a 'slim Bitches Conscience....
ehh not feelin-good flo tho i guess

Im Testing This Fags Standards, you dont belong in the Thread.....
Heres your pressing Transfer. ..your Addressing-Answers, holding more "gay lines" then "Homo Repping-Banners..
Weapon-Tampered,Sublime destined to be into men more then Rectum-Cancer..
Hit'Panik Leaves This Thread Wit Homo SuBlime Shaken Like 'Gay-Private-Dancers'......
couldn't divide this up evenly...bad structure/rectum cancer-do they have that?neva heard of it but a funny meti 4 at that-last line was wak....

total- 4/10

Hit'Panik Easy-pc*1*

Open- panik
Metas - panik
Creavitity - panik
Personals - tie
Flow - sub
Finish - panik
Abuse - panik

vote = panik

opener.............panik
closer..........panik
wordplay..........panik
structure.............tie
punches......................panik
overall...........panik

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openeranik
closeranik
wordplayanik
structure:tie
punchesanik
overallanik..................................... .

sublime D , it looks like it gonna b 0-4 on ur record because hit panik murked u in every catagory in my opinion they wusn't any part of that u bet h.p in...elevate