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I Was Feelin This Shit So Fuckin Much Dude, No Damn Joke. My Situation Ain't Like Yours, Only In A Way Tho. My Dad Used To Work All The Time, Come Home, Drink Beer, N Take Himself To Bed. That Was My Father Figure For The Longest Time. No Real Bonding Or Nothin, I Couldn't Really Gather Up Enuff Shit To Get A Real Connection With Um Till My Parents Split N I Say My Pops Cry For The First Time Cause My Moms Cheated On Him. . That Shit Hit Me Hard And From Then On, I Finally Got That Bond I Always Wanted.

Sorry Bout That Aus, Back To Ya Piece. The Emotions Jus Fuckin Jumped At Me, Shit Was Crazy On The Emotional Tip. I Don't Even Give A Fuck Bout Vocab Or Flow. The Imagery Protrayed, All The Emotions, And Jus The Piece As A Whole And It's Meaning Made It Fuckin Dope Man. Word Up, I Felt This Shit And Could Relate To It.

-Formula.

Really Appreciated Kid..
Its Cool Son.. Dont Worry Bout It..
I Just Wish I Had The Same Shit U Do
In A Way. But He Never Been A Father
Figure To Me Either.. The Originally Name
oF thE Song Was "Sperm Donor" Because
Thats All He Did.. Gave Up His Shit
But NEver Lived Wit The Concequences
So Very Much Appreciated Man

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N if dirty bag had a fukkin name, u defined it

wow that shit was fukkin dope as a mother fukker. my dad just left me and my mom and he is a prick and i could relate to a lot of that. damn dude i dont even know wat to say. that shit kept my jaw to the floor because i absolutely love rhymes with pure substance and that shit was more pure and deep than anythin ive read in a long time really dope drop dude seriously really dope

can i get some feedback

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that was a tight Deep Piece.........i enjoyed tha read............LoL i was listening to the Instrumental of Eminem's Kim wheni read it........the beat fits it well u choose the right lyrics and beat but the chorus i wasnt feeling ya that much on.........all round 9/10.........

Aiight Peace Out Kuz (v)

it was pretty nice i can relate to it caws i been thru it same damn story same damn time same damn lies all it kid bare wit it keep writin itll release ya mind from all the forbidden memories holla..

Thanks.. Uppin

I read this whole piece bout 3 times now, its dope as fuck...

Really deep cause i have hgone through the exact same thing, my dad left before i was born and stillt ries to call me....

Nice piece....

pce

Thanks Bro

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