Keystyle for suicide - Madman-doubleSS
intro myself - L.A.STR~E~TZ
SharpShooterz - Fit

This is to all the haterz who say fuck LM and double-0 seven haha

Chorus - LM
When hate comes to you...
What the fuck you gon' do...
You aint got a clue...
You dunno what to do...
All you wanna do...
Is know why people hatin you...

Verse 1 - LM
It doesnt take much for your chords to be touched...
I'm known as contraversial and stuff, angry and tough...
But if haters wanna play rough then fuck 'em theres no love...
No sign of a dove, this is world war three...
This is me, the MC, be a bitch and diss me...
But if you ever see me in the flesh keep your mouth shut...
Coz you aint got the guts to come and kick my butt...
Look, I've put pen to paper to speak to every hater...
Deliverin shit like a waiter to bite you like an alligator...
I had a friend, she dissed me, now I hate her...
Just shows how shit can change over a few words...
So here we're talkin to all you hate filled internet nerds...

Chorus - LM
When hate comes to you...
What the fuck you gon' do...
You aint got a clue...
You dunno what to do...
All you wanna do...
Is know why people hatin you...

Verse 2 - double-0 seven
once i leave i know words about me, will be spoken,
hate, as well as appreciation can be given out in tokens,
i might be okay, if there was a reason for the shit,
searching in my head, for an explanation, bit by bit,
random hate, not the case, cos once we were tight,
but there only certain things to spout, before a fight,
you should of left out my familiy, no buisness of yours,
now everything exposed, like a popped spots pores,
emotion runs deep in the veins of all things that breath,
offence is something weigh you down, like a wet sleeve,
and if you want the future, to look bright like the sun,
i would stop you ramblings, a weight lifted, like a ton.

Chorus - LM
When hate comes to you...
What the fuck you gon' do...
You aint got a clue...
You dunno what to do...
All you wanna do...
Is know why people hatin you...


EXPLANATION:
No sign of a dove, this is world war three... = dove is a sign of peace.
I had a friend, she dissed me, now I hate her... = Alysha from my open mic called 'Friends no more'

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

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a little simple in many places but over all above the normal garbage i read non stop so i think this was constructive brush it up a lil though.

Not That Bad, But I've Mos Def Seen Better From You LM. You Had The Flow On-Point, But Ya Words And Rhymes Were Too Simplistic. You Can Definately Up Ya Skills Based On This Drop. The Chorus Was Simple As Fuck Too, This Piece Definately Lacked Complexity. Double-O-Seven, You Were A Bit Better, Bringing Some Better Rhymes Than LM. The Flow Remained Almost The Same, So The Read Was Easy. It Was Too Easy Tho, Considering, Once Again, The Simplicity Of This Whole Piece. LM, This Is Below. Double-O-Seven, This Is The First I've Read From You, So All I Can Say Is Elevate. Keep Droppin.

-Formula.

that was a pretty normall piece....^^i agree i have seen betta from LM....but allround its was a pretty good read.. i will give ya 7/10 for it


aiight Peace Out Kuz (v)

OK thanks for the comments. I had the beat to monkeysee monkeydo in my head if that explains some of the ryhme or whatever

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

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this was an ok joint... both of you did good... LM flowed better, but doubleo seven had better lyrics... LM, up your vocab a bit on this... and use some multis... ive seen more complex lyrics from you... all together though, not a bad piece

7/10

simple, effective, good wordplay and an all round
good piece really......enjoyed it and read it twice....
Hook wasn't that strong but verses made up for it

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

Uppin again

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

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OK thanks

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

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It was something original, not bad. Just add some more vocab in there. Yea, and to the people your beefin with. FUCK YOU!!! yall aint shit, and you aint gon be shit. I got ya LM. If you want another verse down, holla at me in our crew from for a collab. aight hommie. Nice drop.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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