yo what u think gwan - Lyrical Mobb
Backstabbers - Double D-27
Corrupted Visions:Shadows - Nok'd Visions

Intro - talkin
A'yo this is for all you haterz....especially you DAARK, little bitch. Read this and weep. Coz I aint scared....fuckin net gangsta's, pathetic.

Verse 1
You aint gotta say much when people hate your guts...
To give 'em a nudge so they re-new their grudge...
It's fucked, no-ones gon' budge til one of us ends up...
In front of a judge for crackin and fuckin up...
Who's lucks up? Who's times up? Who's gon walk up...
To that judge in cuffs like a man ready to take what sentence ...
he has, it all depends on who has the desire to last in life...
And who wants to survive long enough to have a wife...
This life aint nothin but somethin that drives us to die...
So why do we cry when things dont go our way...
That provides me with the balls to just blow you away...
Dont want beef? Then watch what you say, I aint scared to play...
I dont care if next week I'm lay in a casket as long as I'm remembered...
For all the shit I've spit coz my wrists have been slit and my body...
It never quit coz it's tough so I'll play rough, I aint had enough...
So c'mon bitch if your a true thug write some stuff to hit me with...
Fuck that, find where I live so we can sort this out like men...
But until then I'll just make do with a fuckin pen...

Outro - talkin
Hahaha....fuck all you muthafuckin haterz, talkin shit, you dont effect me. Hahaha, man I'm out.

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

this was pretty dope man
real nice read
it says what everyone is thinking
sweet flow
keep droppin'
8.3/10

I AGREE THIS WAS A KICK ASS IN YOUR FACE DROP I LIKED
IT

LM, stay representin hommie. This shit was Ill hommie. Good point, topic kinda played, but you pulled this off. Ayo, go check my flow out and tell me what you think of it hommie.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94673

8/10

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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This shit was ill. i feel the topic. It had a nice flow and i like the wordplay on this piece. It was a little bit short and would be better with a second and third verse. Add that to it and it would be a tight song. Keep droppin' shit like this, it was tight. Props.

its a dope verse....i just have a question???

with like the intro and outro---

does that indicate that this will soon be recorded

or is it just for the effect?

^^^If I get set up on audio it'll be recorded. I wanna get set up on audio

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

yea dis will make a great audio piece
joint was ill nice topic
and it flowed smoothly!
8.5/10

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BEST OF YJ
Holla at cha Boi
Watch Me
Eyez of a Young Nigga

See everybody likes it but I bet nobody will nominate it for top ten

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

o yea peep my flow and tell me wat chu think


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95284

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BEST OF YJ
Holla at cha Boi
Watch Me
Eyez of a Young Nigga

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect