10 lines
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
5 wins
No hate, crew or dr votes
No feeding
No recycling
Due by tonite or early tommarow morning

tonite, and i'm checkin in....
i'll lay my verse soon....
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Checkin' In.

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Ape, wut kinda name is that? wut u an animal?
are u a canibal? is ur mind really that minimal?
man u more likly to get date raped by a male ape!
u wont escape tha grasp when he wants to mate!
do u really think u can swing from my limbs?
u can be like lil kim, and wing from my dick limbs!
u can wrap them lips around my skin, then sit and spin!
now dont be rehersing ur verse, cuz its gon be dirt...
jus be a man and take tha pain to loosing this verse, get hurt...
yo spit aint gon b understood, jus be heard as a slurrrr!

Do I really need to waste a verse on this? Just makes me laugh.

Nigga, I can only drop 1 Line, and still make ya loss record Parallel/
No wonder ya wanted to battle me, Illusion always got a Double L/
Blah Blah Blah Blah Blah, Ape will put this nigga in a hurse/
That was my worst line ever, but it still was better than ya verse/
Visit my Bars, a Punch you couldnt even Afford/
How you gonna be Illusions when it looks like you could even See-Ya-Keyboard/
I'll make ya head spin, ya Illusions will be Seein' Doubles like Rum/
Now you can predict the Future, by just Lookin' At Ya Loss Column/
Battling You is like me Racing-A-Car without an exhaust or a Header/
Advice for you, PM and Admin. and ask him to make a Forum...Ways-To-Get-Better/

That pissed me off how I needed to waste a verse on you. Damn!!!

Damn, I didnt even know. I had some streached lines and then some short lines. Woops. Ooh well, still tore him up. Uppin'.

Vote #1:

X_JohnnyWattz_X .vs. 1liner

Vote #2:

Nok'd Vizion .vs. Strict

No Explanation Needed Really...Ape Killed Illusion...Way Better Punches, Wordplay, And Flow...Not Too Much Personals Though...
Illusion...You Gotta Elevate Alot...

VOTE=APE

Check Out My Battle And Drop Some Honest Votes...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6591#post946591

aiigh Ape you got my vote...

you str8 up killed him...just like planet x said.. there really isnt and explanation.. it would be just a wast of time.. you verse is the explanation..


PZ

i'm gonna give ape this one by far he just had better punches an he handled it more like a veteran you had some alright wordplay though allusions plz hit this up it only needs one more vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91529

punches=ape
flow=ape
structure=ape
word play=ape
personals=tie


vote=APE


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Ahha, people, please break down the verse line for line so we can see our improvments. Thanks.

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^^^Read!!! Ahha. Uppin'.

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