12 lines
due friday
no dr, hate, beef, or any otha bull
no feeding or recycling

check in...

im going out tonight so ill have to drop now...

(had to edit some stuff}

I’de only bite jays lines, coz im curious to taste defeat…
And because ur used to audio-my punches replace da beat!
Whether it be leno you or lopez, ya similar in a certain way…
Coz no matter which im talking to-an L follows Jay!
Warlords have done collabs, and what I’ve noticed reading thru…
Is how Jaypana is always off the hook…opener and verses too!
I ripped this ½ skilled emcee, but now im feeling some remorse…
So ill rip him into two…n let him in my crew…coz we need a ¼(fourth)!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95501
Jays a junkie to skill, and depressed how he never found it…
First stage is admitting ur bad…well congrats for deleting ya sound click!
12th line in…got da win, ya always just a losing cunt…
because only with his boyfriend, does Pana know what its like in front!

its saturday so vote up kidds............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................................

my fault i didn't get to post on time 'cuz it snowed like a muh fucka over where i live so they let me outta school early...and this is my only way to get on the internet at tha moment...i'll post a verse later if u want

yeh that be nice..where is it then?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????????????

sorry it took so long...i got issues

Sorry To Rain On Your Parade, But You're Worse Than The Rest...
He Changed His Name 'cuz Stem Was Borken Off From The Root To Success...
All Jokes Aside, Arateo Brings The Fake. .I Bring The Real...
Look Into His History. .He's Literally RB's Bloopers Reel...
It's Obvious. .He Loves Group Sex, But Men Is His Preference...
Think Back To Classic RB, His Name Has No Reference...
We Was In The Same Crew, Was Constantly On My Dick...
I Tried To Beat Him Off. .Unfortunately, He Was Tha Stick...
I Wanted To Spice Things Up. .But Dropping A Verse For You Is Boring Me...
I'll Leave It At Ten. .So You Can Finally Say You've Done More Than Me...

once again sorry for tha extreme lateness...i got issues

i gotta say ill battle...thought i'd put a vote on this...

I’de only bite jays lines, coz im curious to taste defeat…
And because ur used to audio-my punches replace da beat!

killa opener from arateo, had mad structure all the way through...some nice personals..i really enjoyed this verse i thought it came hard...

jay-pana you come back hard...but i felt it wasan't as hard hittin as AR...You had some funny lines in there...some nice structure and flow...creativity was there..
But i do think AR came wit the goods..he held it all the way through...i was feelin it..

props to both..fucken very good...
vote =Arateo...

can you plz check the link below and drop a honest vote...thanx (its gettin slept on)...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=1

^thanx for tha vote...

not that i'm swaying or anything...but a couple of arateo's personals are false...like tha soundclick line...i never deleted my soundclick

if i didnt like you jay ide bitch about the lateness but its cooll hope u sort ya shit out . . .ur life is more serious than RB

but what i meant by the personal of your soundclick was coz u had some audio u used have in ya sig, n i meant ya got rid of it

if u see what i mean?

uppin

oh aight...i got u now...don't mean to edit ur post but i don't feel like makin a new one
-Jay

uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................uppin this poo poo..................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98207

^^honest vote here please.....




alright battle....

opener+1-A
closer+1-J
punches+2-A
personals+2-tie
wordplay+1-tie
originality+1-A
multis+1-blah
complexity+1-A
cornyness-2-tie
enjoyment+1-A

overall...JayPana (+2)....Arateo (+7)-----Winner no hate at all...please go vote on that battle honestly...thanx

jay pana gets this battle quite easily. .

instead of typing blah blah blah and that played voting stuff i'll just compare each opponents lines with the others, see who's is better. . arateos line will be put first then jay's. .

I’de only bite jays lines, coz im curious to taste defeat…
And because ur used to audio-my punches replace da beat

Sorry To Rain On Your Parade, But You're Worse Than The Rest...
He Changed His Name 'cuz Stem Was Borken Off From The Root To Success...

i wasnt feelin stem/arateos line, jays was much better.


Whether it be leno you or lopez, ya similar in a certain way…
Coz no matter which im talking to-an L follows Jay!

All Jokes Aside, Arateo Brings The Fake. .I Bring The Real...
Look Into His History. .He's Literally RB's Bloopers Reel...

hey a pretty witty line from arateo . . but jays was funny. . hmm. jay edged this one out.
Warlords have done collabs, and what I’ve noticed reading thru…
Is how Jaypana is always off the hook…opener and verses too!

It's Obvious. .He Loves Group Sex, But Men Is His Preference...
Think Back To Classic RB, His Name Has No Reference...

neither. . these line were pretty eh. .


the last 4 from yall were filler, therfore declared tie for those... but pana takes this battle w/ more creative punches and a few funny lines.

vote on me vs BI detained in elite please, theres virtually nothing to sort through, only like 10 battles in there.

Decent battle:

BREAKDOWN:

Punches: Arateo
Wordplay: Arateo
Multis: Arateo
Flow/Structure aka Simpathy: Jay
VERDICT: Arateo

Good verse..Funny.

Peace

__________________

I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

opener - jay
closer - jay
punches - jay both good but jay harder
personals - arateo
wordplay - jay
overall - jay

good battle in elevated....

peace