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GOOD LUCK PZ

ONLY EXPLAINED VOTES COUNT PZ

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Yo check it...

its like this........
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Yo look at me and look at the world man/
stick to your game plan and understand/

I dont got time to be wasting on this foo/
hes probably picking his rhymes from his buddies at school/

but i aint detroit and im not brooklyn/
Im the head of the men that have commited 9 sins/

Look man i dont care id rather see u be strained/
In fact you know what you should B.Detained/

1 to the 3 to the 4 this guy has to say 10 or mo/
In fact this guy is the ugliist hoe ill ever know/

B Detained= His name
Numbers were based on my demo song 1234 but added a few touches to them

Commited 9 sins was part of gods plan

Keyed...check in also....

Here's the picture..I'm Framed N Admired..your Fake n Expired
....this chumps so decrepit he's already Fatigued n left Tired
but I aint one to fuck w/ the Matrix..lmfao..or even the Prophet
...stop Dr'ing a fukin film..so grab ya pants and Hop off it....
to make Prophit..on RB battles you've gotta be able to Read...
..oh you cant Read my Mind!!...well I said no Herbs Please
your like a Disease...your there...jus buggin n pissin peeps Off
and the comparison is that I can spread you with a Cough..lol
8 lines done..i dont wanna waist more feeble thoughts on you..
so I'll Retire on this line...grab ya Pension book..its time to Renew

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nicely done lets get these honest votes in guys COEM COME COME!............................................. ..------------------------------------

oh yea dawg..you can only upp the battle 5 times
jus dont want ya gettin dq'd pz...uppin____1st____
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Huh u can only battle 5 times eh gayness people take to long to vote i guess i should start posting on people then to lend a hand on others

BI got this shit....................
........prophet barely dissed him.......................
.............BI was rippin on tha matrix sig................
nice BI

vote-BI

hit this up with an honest vote.........thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96322

BI took this easily...

I'd break it down and all but I"m really just too lazy right now...
Fuck it... you know who I am...
And you should repsect my vote

Vote- BI

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METAPHORES - ...
VOCABULARY - B.I.Detained
PUNCHLINES - B.I.Detained
STRUCTURE - B.I.Detained
CREATIVITY - B.I.Detained
PERSONALS - B.I.Detained
OPENING - B.I.Detained
CLOSING - B.I.Detained
MULTIES - ...
FLOW - tie

OVERALL – B.I.Detained

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