kmfrob - Drifter
Rule - Death In Our Eyes Feat. Kclipz 4 Murkin
Infinite Skillz - Rememberin Us: Based on a true story
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Fuck u , u cant stand me..

This is to all the kids, dreaming of a rap career = )

Edicius
Ull like to be star fuck u ,picture this! u always stayin a faggot ass fan
Dont try its useless like deaf peeps walking around with a fukkin walkman , ..
Dreaming of makin it in this biz? haha like bush speaking the truth aint gonna happen..
ur future is set, in a dark smoking room at the back screaming& clappin !
Get a grip face reality damn u so blind? u think the net is gonna help u ?
gettin a rapcareer lmao yea im a star my website has a slogan 'Illness defined..'
Kids are funny these days like bash signed on 5 net sites and he just begon!
droppes his mic's jerk of on his feedback, real life ?? None!..Oh ooh..
an ignorant, arrogant fuck , but still a herb calles everyone names, but theres a relief!..
This kid is in real life a butcher,lmao ..explains his continiously search for..beef!
But serious ..this aint a joke, im tellin u what its like, ur eyebrows frown?
u cant take the truth!, this aint a circus this is real! i aint no fukkin clown!..
Nah im jus playin , see now i'm doin it again,
and bash dont take this personal.. dont get it twisted! dont jump of a fukkin roof..
u the one sayin 'its just the net' but deep down inside, ..ur cryin,i dont even need the proof!
Oh i olmost forgot! u have a change! yall after readin this, dont get strange feelings in ur belly
u can always start a career of spittin bullshit, combined with bling bling , just look at nelly!..

[hook]
You Ain't A Rapper - Just A 2nd Class Citizen...
Your Shit Plummets - Like The Wall In Berlin…
You Aint a Rapper, Black Magic? You Just a Sin!..
Spittin’ Raps - Like Vanilla Ice Was Your Twin…

Rhytmic
Could Spit 1000 Lyrics, Dissing Each And Everyone Of You…
Or I Could Just Rip The Shit Outta Herbs Like BabyBlue…
Who Need To Pursue Intelligence To Spit A Insult…
You Spat One Incoherent Battle - And Look At The Result…
I’m Just Randomly Dissin’ People, Bringing Them Down…
Like I was In Search of Killa Instinkz Supposed Lyrical Crown…
But I’ll Settle On One Cat, Not So Renouned - Dope Wax…
Dawg Listen To me, You Can’t Even Speak Truth With the Facts…
You Gotta Speak Lies Like You was A Government Axe…
Come On Dawg, You’d be Better Off PLayin The Sax…
Like Ja I’m Spittin The Outdated Rhythm n’ Blues…
I’m Rappin Fiercely Like I’m About To Blow A Fuse…
It’s My Right To Confuse - I Could Become A Eminem Hater -
N’ Step In Camarac’s Shoes, Too Big, Can’t Handle Your Views…
But I’ma keep Following Every Path That I Choose - In my Rhymes…
Motherfucker I’m Like FormulaMc I “Crucify My Lines”…
Then I Shock People Like Daniel Surviving Being Fed To The Lions…
But When People Are traumatized At me Spitting This Sick Shit…
Just Look For Baron Gods Diss - When he Called C-section A Spick…

[hook]
You Ain't A Rapper - Just A 2nd Class Citizen...
Your Shit Plummets - Like The Wall In Berlin…
You Aint a Rapper, Black Magic? You Just a Sin!..
Spittin’ Raps - Like Vanilla Ice Was Your Twin…


Damn theres still hope then..= (

Dope

FeedBack plz Up^

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^Up..

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nice. breakdown:

Edicus-had trouble with the flow a little. but it was nice. i can
tell that its a good one for audio maybe. but it was nice. sum
lines were stretched tho. vocab came nice. nice topic and enjoyed
the wordplay in it. tight if you ask me. 8/10

Hook-decent.l ast line was nice. first was ok.

Rhytmic-nice overall verse. easy read and enjoyable. i didn't get
some parts tho. like the mentioning of emcees and wutever. but
if you exclude it then it was a well written verse. flowed nicely
and the stayed out topic. props. 8.5/10

check my thread wen i post it up please.
peACE

Fucka structure :P its audio wise writtin = ) oh and the flow, ..its no struggle, ..some times its flowin from inside..lol, but still thnx..hit urs up..

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nice. breakdown:

Edicus-had trouble with the flow a little. but it was nice. i can
tell that its a good one for audio maybe. but it was nice. sum
lines were stretched tho. vocab came nice. nice topic and enjoyed
the wordplay in it. tight if you ask me. 8/10

Hook-decent.l ast line was nice. first was ok.

Rhytmic-nice overall verse. easy read and enjoyable. i didn't get
some parts tho. like the mentioning of emcees and wutever. but
if you exclude it then it was a well written verse. flowed nicely
and the stayed out topic. props. 8.5/10

check my thread wen i post it up please.
peACE
ACE HIT IT PERFECT THERE

YOU GUYS DO COMPLIMENT EACH OTHER BUT I THINK ED HAD MINOR PROBS ON HIS VERSE OTHER THEN THAT THIS WAS GOOD AND VERY CREATIVE

Retires....

Quik keys need to take mroe time write, ..i write to quik ..thnx up^

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dont be discouraGED
i hold you and rhythmis to higher expectations because i see what your capable of by no means should you get discouraged you have a great talent both of you do i just know your capable of more this wasnt bad by any means though it was good.

i liked... but i can see some lines are a bit stratched!

I know, ..= ) ..thnx for that ..but still to many times i fuck up, ..and come half assed..need to stop that

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Audio aint stretched!..the flow was on point so its not stretched..= )

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