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Old 12-11-03, 06:40 PM   #1
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POTENT WITHERSMAN DEZ AND DROPZ.....


you need to see,that we,a collab of some of the illest m.c.'s-
in one room we like abollo victoms quarenteened.
and its a gaurentee...with no delay-
our spit infects crowds with saliva spray-.
you SUCK on MIKES so basically your weak ass is just gay.
no matter how hard you WORK at cloning me you'll never earn my NAME.
you'd need Aklaim cheat codes to achieve our level in the game-
and its a shame....
when we rip scripts parental adivisory means we deadly-
after us the only way nice becomes trendy-is when people say your friendly.
to whoever battle me- or any memeber of N.C.-
gets dismemberd while we break newtons theory-
cause i refuse to fall off....
im a criminal with no respect the laws of gravity.
spitting enough flows we could shift the earths axis-
you cd is only good for a refund... a right off for taxes.
and they say NONCENTZ how you so POSITIVE your click that hard-
cause we stay SHOCKing you like the POSITIVE charge-from a DIEHARD..
i'll stomp a dj dorment -with torment-
they couldnt mix something sweet if they were a trained gourmet.
your weak....couldnt even place last in tournament-
your cd would only sell for car ornaments.
my percise slice makes me a lyrical surgeon-with wunds submergen-
in battles compition dont exsist.... like permiscuist virgins.
im know to leave heads hurten-from brain splurgen-
cough up some funk... nah you couldnt do that if you had holotis burpen.
flow igniter ...any thing you say i can replay and make tighter-
the day i get out~match~ed will be cause i forgot my lighter.
who the mos def even the rapper wont test me-
you dont bite you grind my rhyme stop spitting of extacy.
damn by now either your saying or diagnosiing me ill-
yeah i'll free~style... but your career will take a loss..thats my bill.
my bold fasaud rips 6 to your sripts for a win.-
cause i hold being a lyrical god down like a crucifix pin .
NO STOPPEN LIKE CRACK BASS I STAY ROCKEN-
when i tell rappers to get ion where they fit in they lay in their coffins.
dont get it miss read-weather alive or dead-
if you dont know read my signature for the formula to a nuclear warhead.

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Old 12-11-03, 06:56 PM   #2
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damn this was a tight fucking drop, reppin well.....some good hard hittin shit....nice work twin.....pZ.......
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Old 12-11-03, 07:12 PM   #3
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thanks pop hey im on locos new joint as well im 2nd verse
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Old 12-11-03, 07:15 PM   #4
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I was feeling this hommie, you had a conisistand flow, it was hard, and it had me reading the whole verse. I like this hommie, you seem to get better at somthing everytime you write...
8.5/10

--->Can you return the favor and check " Deacon Diss "

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Old 12-11-03, 09:00 PM   #5
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yo word this was tight as fuck, the flow, vocab, multis were all there. a 9.5/10.

so do you want me to pm you a verse for a colab???

any ways hit up this link and drop som feedback thx.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98160
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Old 12-11-03, 09:31 PM   #6
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you had a good verse here man...you stayed on point the hole way which was great, you had a lot of good lines i'd quote but i'm lazy lol...but your finish was great i liked that warhead bit and your creativity for vocab was awesome...very well done mayn...keep it up
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Old 12-11-03, 11:09 PM   #7
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Old 12-11-03, 11:14 PM   #8
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Another Dope Drop WP. . God Damn Duke. . Everything On Point, Delivery, Content, Flow. You Make Me Respect You As An MC More N More Each Drop. You Keep Droppin These Gems Cuz, N I'ma Keep Readin.

your weak....couldnt even place last in tournament-
your cd would only sell for car ornaments.
my percise slice makes me a lyrical surgeon-with wunds submergen-
in battles compition dont exsist.... like permiscuist virgins.
im know to leave heads hurten-from brain splurgen-
cough up some funk... nah you couldnt do that if you had holotis burpen.

^^^ God Damn Dog, You Out Do Yourself Everytime. . CD Ornament Line Was Funny.

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Old 12-11-03, 11:18 PM   #9
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thanks twin i just need to work harder im not where i want to be i have to get better thats my attitude
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Old 12-11-03, 11:45 PM   #10
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WP. . . Get At Me Through PM Or AIM (FormulaTN). . If You Interested, I Wanna Do A Collab With You. . Holla N Lemme Kno Somethin Aiight.

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Old 12-11-03, 11:47 PM   #11
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pm me what you want and need i have to ghost but would like a collab
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Old 12-12-03, 04:44 AM   #12
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werd....another nice drop from word perfect. Stay spittin that fire 4real 4real. Keep it up and be easy son, 1
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Old 12-12-03, 04:54 AM   #13
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yo Perfect Ya Always have nice drops...ya flow was good ya vocab was good...ya structure was Good...Aiight Peace......
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Old 12-12-03, 02:07 PM   #14
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thnks i will continue to do my best
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Old 12-12-03, 04:15 PM   #15
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I spark the heata to ya heart n start ta beat ya- With a parkin' meta in the dark n leave ya- I'm hotta than scarlet fever when I spit text topics. My shit is so sick that my pen sweats toxins- I live dead logic. Got a big red coffin. After i dig my sixth ditch i'll put ya bitch there- promise..It gets no sicka than that. I'm bigga than Rap. A generous cat. With liquar n cash. The center of maSS N gravity, causin tragedies by the masses. Blisterin' asses massively. Naturally i'm the baddest....\


Your verse deserved a keystyle..I havn't been here in a few months. Good to see you're still doin' your thang. This drop is something of the sort in which you posted before my leave..Skill wise and format wise at least...Flow's good ..Alot better..The technical side is the only reaL Lackluster..Maybe the overall concept as well..But none the less a read well worth the time..Keep spittin', homie.

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