Head In The Clouds : Jecht - A2Z - MeNTiLL - 13th Apostle

Jecht
I stand tall and im proud, I always got my head in the clouds,
I use the clouds to cover my self in the wonderful shrouds..
There aint nothing like chillin and smoking a blunt and stuff,
Some kids try to test me but ill punk this runts and bluff..
Im killer when its time to come with it i straight brain storm,
Ill off anyone that will get in the way of my name being scorned..
My raps are felt and most of the time they get slept on in rounds,
Im gonna make it to heaven thats why i got my head in the clouds..

A2Z
Encouraging A Days Love...Kicking Hate In The Mouth
Soaring High Above...Flys Cupid Among The Clouds
Armed With Joyous Bows... Name Is Laughed Upon
My Name Is A Punchline...But Yet My Work Lingers On
Laying Upon A Cloud...See All The Hatred And The Grief
Scream A Cry Of Sorrow...Pull An Arrow From Its Sheath
I Let The String Slack...Never Does This Weapon Miss
Hit A Young Man In The Back...And Into Wedded Bliss
Santa Claus Reeps Glory...But I Crave None Of That
I Sit And I Always Worry...About If My Day Will Be Back
Love Is A Fading Thing...An Angel Can Only Do So Much
Love Count Is Always Dropping..Without An Arrow's Touch
Take None Of It For Granted...Love Isn't A Given Thing
Too Many People Die Lonely...Finger Lacking It's Ring
Another Day's Work...Flighting Arrows For A Daily Wage
Just Six Thousand More Years...I'll Be At Retiring Age

13th Apostle
Fuck life, it's a waste of time and mine's a lesson-
Of evil influence sent to ignite depression-
A knife, a Wesson, this will take this life and questions-
Away, blood on the blade in which I sliced my neck with-
A type of message, sent from the heavens in sounds-
That would shatter mortal ears, and crumble everything down-
Sort of like my soul, lost, not a sediment found-
I'm dead on the ground, an open void, my head's in the clouds-

MeNTiLL
So many thoughts fill my mind, Im tryin' to find
Reasons why Im alive, And others why Imma die
Constantly dryin' my eye, Searchin' mainly for reason
Im trapped in this season, Steady pain is believing
But I'll stay Im not leavin', There's so many things I haven't seen
It's juss, Forever seems too long to wait for feathered wings
I could never bring, A crows when my tears stick around
And Im cryin' so often now, It feels like my heads in a cloud

Oh Yeah ... My fault ... I replied to

Evolve : Merry Christ Missed
Koalatee : Phuture Courses
Speek.E.Z. : Suicidal Thoughts

nice shit from all of yall. Keep that shit up the whole different roles thing made that shit work

Holla at em.

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Nice collab guys Not bad I though a good effort from all and ya came strong in tha flow and structure was good......A2Z I think had the Betta Verse but thats My opinion...you guys worked well....ya started it off well then followed each other nicely.....nice drop Keep It Flowin Yall Peace...

Thanks for the replies ... Uppin' for some more ... Peace

good shit, all had an a'ight flow, good vobac an' shit, 13th had the smoother style... nice work... 1

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Thanks for the replies...appreciate the feedback.

P.e.a.c.e.

Love Is A Fading Thing...An Angel Can Only Do So Much
Love Count Is Always Dropping..Without An Arrow's Touch

Tight

But I'll stay Im not leavin', There's so many things I haven't seen
It's juss, Forever seems too long to wait for feathered wings
I could never bring, A crows when my tears stick around
And Im cryin' so often now, It feels like my heads in a cloud

Illness...Especially the last line and the second one..I see Aesop isquoted in mentill's sig..The seconsd and the third guy gave me kind of an aesop feeling..Tight shit..The first guy kind of slacked back from the others but none the less made a god effort to keep up and had some tight lines..My fav. verse was mentills..You killed it on the last four lines..Beautiful ending..Shame this only has 6 replies..Very good drop..


All i ever wanted was to pick apart the days, put the pieces back togtether my way -Aesop...Word...

1ne

nice collab, everybody had good flow, Felling A2Z's verse the most.Had some silck lines.,Vocab and content was aiight. Good piece overall though

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Word ... Good look's ya'll ... Uppin' for a few more ... PEace

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All the verses were tight as hell. I thought it would get boring, cause it's a long read. But it dident, you caught my attention very well. Nice vocab from all, nice flow, and structere. The lines wernt to long, and they wernt to short. Nice collab hommies...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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Yeah i agree with everyone this was a good collab here...enjoyed everyones verse, all of you came pretty good in this...all the verses seemed to flow nicely together i thought....vocab was good from everyone...everything seemed good in this...overall id say this was a good collab from you guys...keep at it.

nice flow and structure....entertaining, not the least bit boring

great use of vocab and an overall great job

nice verses by all of you

9.5/10

..nice piece, keep droping =]