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12-16-03, 08:18 PM
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Dropz
IP: 4550 84E0
Me n Dropz writin all the time...layin down rhyme after rhyme
Lyrics so thick that the cops consider it a crime No one drops lines like we do just ask after readin 4 verses feels like your inhalin nerve gas Dropz..this son can really harass lay beats down quicker than anyone in his class This kid cant be outlast the style of his lines yet to be surpassed dysfunctional families..mothers that try to beat us as they please but we still goin full blast Dropz Gene Pool Handcuffs Last edited by Nyte Fire : 12-16-03 at 08:38 PM. |
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12-16-03, 08:20 PM
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Word.
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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12-16-03, 08:23 PM
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IP: 4550 84E0
Lets get some feedback playaz
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12-16-03, 08:23 PM
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
work on ya structure, it will help the flow along......try and add a bit more complexity to ya drops....and some of the lines could use some better vocab...but by ya posts it looks like it is ya first...so...it aint too bad.....jus take into concideration what i said...and work on it.add more length to them aswell..pZ
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12-17-03, 09:18 AM
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IP: 7EE3 6327
Come on people, can I get some feedback???
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12-17-03, 10:54 AM
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Half Lyricist/Half King
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IP: C1DA C961
it was alright but hey Dropz look at watcha got on this open mic from me Se7eN, a nice diss
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