I wrote this awhile back an im not sure if its any good but i thought id share it... feedback pls



I am a rose to die
petels fall into the sand
my tears glide into the palm
of another wounded hand

Here i am to lay
spending my final days
a reflection blue
from the pupils of dismay

Staring I am
as the body lifts to stand
both of us together
crippled rose and crying man

They say our bodies rot
ashes will spread accross the sea
memories will be forgotten
along with you and me

I am a rose to die
but long so i have lived
had spread my red devotion
who those who cared to give

Days they have gone
so slowly then so fast
the sun promised me future
future brought me past

Your eyes have adorned
my frail purpose
as my life
has been your eyes

Our worlds have been words spoken
We all, a rose to die