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10 barz of skillz(please critique harshly)
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...791#post1013791
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...822#post1013822 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...826#post1013826 The benefit I gain from verbal expression is immeasurable to me When I spit my game my next quetion's is it pleasurable to read? The pleasure's all mine when I spit rhymes fluently flowin' fluidly I treasure my lines cos they shine beautifully like golden •••elery Lyrics paintin' my mental pictures my mind an' rhymes showin' unity Each verse an essential scripture in the path I've chosen musically I'm always gonna give my best wit' each verse cos I do it dutifully I'm worth less than famous rappers but same quality like duty free Truthfully tho hip hop's still new to me been spitten two to three Always stayin' tru to me that's somethin' vets have gotten thru to me So bring ya crew to beef I'm spittin' fire they jus' fuel to feed It'll be cool to see get murdered lyrically tryin' to screw wit me Grew up hip hop schoolin' me every track I heard my skills grew in me But they're unproven need to show someone that they're true indeed On the microphone I'd leave your whole fuckin hood in ruins bleedin' Raw emotion's fuellin' feelin's everythin' I see all I'm doin's feedin' To satisfy my appetite for new inspiration from my experiences Which occupies all of my time between each of my lyrical appearances A story told about the journey an' what I've learnt along the way My very soul an' bein' is the wat my pen spills across the page Last edited by Doctor Ill : 12-24-03 at 11:02 AM. |
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