This my first time doin this. I ussually just make the beats. so just tell me what yall think.

gangbangin,murderin and killin//
stuck a nigga to da cellin//
bloody body chillin//
can't fight da feelin//
im an M-TOWN villian//

iwas trained by schatti//
that nigga from da M-TOWN valley//
who b lightin the dro in the catti//
smell the aroma we start to rally//

smokin da potent//
heavily tokin//
relaxin and smokin//
we never b chokin//
4 ever b jokin//
laughin and lokin//
we never b mopin//
4 ever b floatin//