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12-28-03, 08:50 PM | #31 | |
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whoa This Collab was hot ya all had It..ya Flow was Nice by All and whitelightning sarted it off Nicely then Speek.E.Z. did well For his Verse that was Good Flow and Structure so I think you 2 did well.......but........EMERGE your verse was shit Joken man Ya Verse was Good to Ya Had FLow and ya Structure and ya had that thing:
Many circumstances invest one of which is a pounding chest Yet I infest with my Jedi ingress…admiring only the best I only assimilate those traits for those fighting inevitable losses None of them considered prophets nor assembled on crosses Fighting by their own beliefs a gene damn worthy of bequeath Love, faith, religion, & moral discipline none ever placed beneath Under vain pleasures…or instant gratification…of their own Eternal flames light enlightening even without a sun still shone Never will they dare accept theories imposed…a mortal sin Calm in presentation even in defeat not to mention…a win Everyone I ever looked up to for bravery not necessarily morals Orals dictated eloquently such manner cutting enemies like chorals Values so important…enough to disregard the loves of his life Even willing to rest unpeacefully knowing he widowed a wife Ready yet shooken steadily looking…into a one inch tunnel Yes…he is prepared to drop his life into the forgotten funnel Only thing worth living for got you determined with imprudence Under no circumstance should you compromise love for influence ^^that was Nice work... SO this was Nice by you all....so this was Nice and I would give ya 10/10 But Im Not Gonna ........PeacE............ Last edited by -uski- : 12-28-03 at 08:52 PM. |
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