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Old 01-01-04, 01:56 PM   #1
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untitled america song

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masta c
liba dee
lyrical killer

dont just bitch about the structure. we all know that real rap doesn't have structure. this isn't fuckn' poetry thank you.

try to capture the image on screen for all teens to see
our flags waving, hands to forheads in an instant
with a lady who can't sing worth a lick
singing the anthem in the distant, america's in trouble
there's no denying it, when Bush signed on the dot
the plot got hot, an uncessary war took the spotlight
with kids who still had zits rocking the fight
rockets fly in the air at night, we are winning the fight

little suzy was your average person
she wanted to become a fucking surgeon
but she became discouraged
because her C.O. told her she was worthless
now the dream is under the surface
because that comment made her extremly nervous

you think your life is bad
well just check out jimmys
he's wacked out
because he blacked out in the army
his fuckn' drill sargeant told him he was next to nothing
nect thing you know he' be confronting
with a gunning
remember full metal jacket?
we all know that's what's gonna happen
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