RapVerse.com Community - TheUnderRated vs. Metaphysik

01-03-04, 04:42 AM

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Quoted From TheUnderRated
Mix dickriders and ring votes, now thats metaphysiks trail
Took that class in gradeschool, I was too intelligent so i failed
C, The physix of your xpilzit phlows are unnatural to the scientific method...
Cause no matter what you produce in ya rhymes, they'll never be respected
Your like Bullshit Gen eds so i'm a get credit and then drop you...
like oil mixed with water theres no way that i can't top you......
scientifically drop you, burn you up like asteriods hittin the o Zone
A-typically this unknown stops you dead like I was born prone
this battles like david and goliath except this time the giant wins
which is you so congratulations merk me sometime again.........

Punches were decent
Some were played
Alot the concepts were played
ya verse was ok
Still needs some Elevation...
Overall...13/20

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[i]Quoted From Metaphysiks[/u]
Washed up like detergent, never hit anything like pimps that are virgins//
In need of surgeons, Unders wrapped in towel and burned on top like turbans//

Leave Under out dated like kids wit no dates at dances mad as fuck//
This kid sucks, make you pray to "negative charms" like you believe in bad luck//

Your not ready like premature birth, punchin your face, it hurts//
Hells on earth, put pennies on this beef then squash it for what its worth//

Ill is what your not, your popped, im dialing bullets like I call shots//
Make your throat clot, like suspenseful books thats thickened wit no plot//

Your minds not right like your head tilts to the left, hit your cleft//
Stealing your life like baseball bases, theft, three shots and nothings left//

Punches were also decent
Hit a bit harder than TheUnderRated's
Flow was pretty good.. structure..OLD
Wordplay... some were played...
Overall.......15/20

Vote-Metaphysiks
Meta came a bit harder...
Kinda weak battle tho
TheUnderRated..ya need to elevate a bit
No hate... just bein real

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Metaphysik	5	100.00%
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