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Old 01-07-04, 02:06 PM   #1
adagio
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feedback please

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Ive got an open mind 24/7//
You shouldnt battle anymore just give up//
Like your momma said its better safe than sorry//
I took her advice, I wore a condom when I fucked her//
I felt for her, she dont need another son like you//
When you came out the world was in shock//
The worlds ugliest baby, so tha doc slapped ya mom//
Go crawl back under ya stone before ya get stepped on//
Im gonna smoke you like I would canibus//
Just Get out of here, heres some coin go catch the bus//

people are sayin this sucked cos most of it didnt rhyme, does ya verse really have to rhyme?
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