This was a really dope piece Mr.S...
I loved how you brought out the imagry..
Great flow..
These last 5 lines just caught me..
"i can envision the feelings it will create as hopeless
just like the snowless christmas i never celebrated
plus the new year came belated as demonstrated
filled with hatred in-complacent, the life we live in
class ends in two minutes, so go ahead and finish it"
Props for the whole piece..
Check this piece out please..I think I put a little something about you in it..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106609

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