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Yeah i agree this was a good piece here....enjoyed the read....you got the message across nicely i thought in this....had a nice solid structure....you had some nice multies through out the piece as well....the flow in this i thought was good, it flowed pretty smooth...vocab in this was good....content overall was good also i thought....made a good read...keep at it.
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