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Old 01-24-04, 09:22 AM   #1
1rstDraft
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Its only short but juss lookin fo a lil feedback/crit...

People say i have a hard time displayin my affection/
But do nuttin but complain when aggression hits tha surface of my expression/
My family thinks i'v fallen deep into depression/
I try to explain that state only hits when tha beam aint got much left in/
Wouldnt be half this bad if i still had a girl wit me nightly carresin/
Tho misinformed, my mind wasnt even slightly deformed/
My life meanings always been something unformed/
Even tho my hearts warm yet still remains battle-torn/

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