dis aircrafts on a suicide route like them planes that hit them towers
Cut his neck why he’s in tha air now carson’s creatin blood showers
This nigga whack…changin his name cause he had around 60 losses
niggaz punches aint hittin..so like mortal kombat this win is flawless
Carsonjet From boston…its bout to be another massacre in tha makin
This nigga will be dead….this aint no makaveli this cat wont be fakin
Usin some extra eyes in his avy..tryin to improve his imparred vision
My punches hit jet wit precision..joker win’n by KO is the final decision
Battlin newbies tryna get his record up so he can finally get some respect
This nigga is old as dirt he can neva be hard even viagra cant get’em to erect
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this was pretty good had some nice personals and good structure
ill say 8/10 ratio,this had nice flow too, easy to go with,good punches
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Joker, Fuk ur sig an ur Hip-Hop Remix..
Ima rip Ur thread like a retarded seamstress
Your meaningless, dawg your the butt of all jokes
U define what it is to serve L's from head choke's...
Wit out IJL your broke, your lucky Xtreme likes u..
ILLunatic was a Dick ride win, an U know that shits true..
We kno your wak, joke...u already gave Hip-Hip a new look
12-1?Vet wise? no...You just got the anal booked...
Thinkin your tight...Lol, maybe if ur sportin tighty whiteys
It's pathetic....Half of RB knows that ur a righty..
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pretty good but the finisher was whack and good werdplay
well this had some creativity but lacked serious punches
joker had more direct personals i felt as carson had a couple
overall 7/10,it wasnt all that great just look at it
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vote/joker
hit my sig up

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