Now im devourin' these cowards, when i spit lyrical showers,
unfoldin niggaz like flowers wit these ill explicit powers,
just bow at his fuckin feet, or prepare for a quick retreat,
cause im not like these other niggaz, im eatin ya pussy beef's,
I repeat, ill open up shop and the dynasty won't be stopped,
bitches pop shit on the streetz till we step on the fuckin block,
when i shock niggaz feel the pain, like needles peircin ya brain,
i'll leave em physically slain, like victims that's hit by trains,
i don't need to mention my name trick's you know its Da Killa,
and im illa than any shit you fuckin bitches deliva
nigga please, backin from challanges aint part of my style,
this Kid's the brand new "Fuck You" posta child,
fuck denial im droppin truth and i ain't claim to be the best,
but im slowly approachin my status puffin out my fuckin chest.

give some feedback cause i wanna know whats wrong with it.

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