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02-07-04, 12:35 AM | #16 | |
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it was actually probably me.
this piece was really good. the flow was near-flawless, there was good use of internal rhyming and multies and the like. You writer's voice was weak. You vocab was nice. Your imagery was dope. question: What was the point of the entire thing? what were you trying to say?
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