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03-01-04, 03:03 PM | #1 | ||
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wah blow
i wrote dis jus now and i think it needs improving but i dont know what to do.......maybe something to help the flow of it ...and the context....anywayz here it is.... When start a sentence make ya sparkle blemish Ya mastered Offensive wit no “comeback” like a man wit no arms in tennis start repenting and release a dark menace And I'm a judge rap is your ass give you a hard sentences You need at least twelve jewels to rap flows push off ya platue….. male groupie fass~yo i more hard dan you bastard allstars rhyme tigter dan fat people in small cars masicar..fuck the why, whats, or whos ares give u a new scar i shoot bars ,blud u a fruit bar nah ya rhyme aint acute to these upscale perplex try change the subject ,when ya style aint developing like a lil gals breast Mic skills type grills like I'm Michael Jill Remarkably ill n embarking my skill Starting to kill like Jason’s son who inherited a mask in his will Parking on hills u best be garding ya grill cus u emcees don’t know “jack” like he was parting “Jill” Slide of kid , an let a grown man handle this LIKE SINGLE PARENT MOTHERS YA KNOW WHO DADDY IS no comparisin i cant be compared to others physically impaired from consumptions of bairs for supper disses get whiss-pairds and mutter, be dat dareless bugger dat jus puts fear in other careless mugger man it wudnt surprise me if ya mums ya fathers brother Beat u to death ya mixtape, but say to the police dat i chased you off a sky scrapper Find 5 blades quick, 9 wide razors, to ripp ya face wit My rhyme DOPNESS IS OFF THE TRACK LIKE DWANE CHAMBERS Remain humble cus i know enough plus on road its tough, r.a the crew that rolls wit us so no gays challenge me...i stay slaying des beats cut up emcee like a postman’s, wage ..salaries I playing 4 keeps ,you bitch ya "gene type" is double xx, ra got my back like syimees and even if you are a bloke i'll beat u untill ya "chromosomes" are Y.me! its blatant dat i'll be raid ya station im blazing soo you manz fainting playing wit ya self like beckham play fifa on the playstation rebel alliance got the skills so we better hence..skill be evident kicks so hard my "athletes foots" an "Olympic gold medallist" So buy the e.p when its comes out Beating niggas like chung chow blow sweeping dese tugs till dey dun...ouch! the new shit on the stereo And you could tell that it's real when you hear me go hear flow Skills) gramma spitz the hitz am im vile Spit flows rip shows spin on the vinly (Skills) rebel alliance dropping dark science start violence jack up the beat cuz we bar pirates (Skills) It's, the music that ya peeps love Each thug, is now reppin this with deep love (Skills) r.a we duelin again spillin ya veins Watch as we killin dem fake what do ya think i need to do |
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