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03-13-04, 04:42 PM | #1 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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First freestyle. Please read
IP:
Ok, I'm new to rappin'. And this is my first freestyle I created. Please let me know what I am missing and what I should take out, and all that other type of stuff.
Here it is: Your rappin’ technique, is not what you expected/ You like William Hung, famous for bein’ rejected/ Hearin’ your rhymes, I’d say it’s time to elevate/ Your girl be wantin’ me, so you forced to masturbate/ You just fuck around, wastin’ everybody’s time/ Don’t know what you was thinkin’, don’t know what’s on your mind/ You go around town wantin’ a beef wit a cat/ If that’s true, I’ll add two large fries and a dog wit that/ Don’t fuck around wit a nigga, that you can’t touch/ Or end up gettin’ your ass killed, on the hospital bus/ Yea, it’s true, that I fucked you up alright/ Like Michael Jackson, your face went from black to fuckin' white/ |
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