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5 | 83.33% |
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Rb's Teacher
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$$upreme: You need ta elevate Completely Structurely, vocab , and punches.
your stuff didnt even rhyme half of the time, so just reread your stuff and practice on what you need to work on accomplishment: your verse was aight. your structure was moderate and your flows along with punches and the whole nine. if i had to say to work on something it would have to be structure (explain anything you think people wont understand it shows a lil more veteran kind of style) open: accomplishment close: accomplishment personals: accomplishment metas: accomplishment punches: accomplishment multis: accomplishment V/ ACCOMPLISHMENT |
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