$$upreme: You need ta elevate Completely Structurely, vocab , and punches.
your stuff didnt even rhyme half of the time, so just reread your
stuff and practice on what you need to work on

accomplishment: your verse was aight. your structure was moderate and
your flows along with punches and the whole nine. if i had to say to work on something it would have to be structure (explain anything you think people wont understand it shows a lil more veteran kind of style)

open: accomplishment
close: accomplishment
personals: accomplishment
metas: accomplishment
punches: accomplishment
multis: accomplishment
V/ ACCOMPLISHMENT