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Russia

Loneliness, despair
Gruesome bodies everywhere,
The aroma of death overtakes the air,
Anguish, starvation,
Hunger, because of limited mastication,
A life filled with dreams? A life filled with devastation,
Frigidness, bacteria,
The overwhelming cold in the gulag’s in Siberia,
Decease’s in this weather can crush your whole criteria,
Leadership, inferior,
The dictators are oh so powerful and superior,
The people think that they are good, but their motives are ulterior
Anger, hostility,
Is all of this worth it? Or Is all of this done in futility?
This gulag has put me threw pain and suffering, and humility and left me with no more capabilities.
To oppress my abilities as a man.
Dictators? Gulags?

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