Alright The "Break Down"

Checck... Madd Hatters Lines:

imma come out this fuckin corner swingin/
you got one second to live you can hear the angles singin

^Wtf? Wheres The Punchline??

shoot up ya house smash the family picture/
a shot bounces and suddenly hits ya/
goes into you like it was made to fit ya/
live life good cuz you have no future

^^Getting.. Of Base' .. And Verse Looks Fucked Up!!' ... Best Fix It' ..!!


Alright...

Check G Deuce's Lines:

Game Ruling, I’m pulling “MADD” rhymes out my “HAT”
Yous a wansta, copy and pasting lines for a rap.

^Alright !! Nice Opener' .... 9/10

It’s a rap, cause this fakeass MC needs to take off his wig
I’ll Make his losing streak almost as big as this nigga’s sig (Damn)

^Nice Punchline... And Good Use Of Multie' ..!!! 10/10

He uses cuss words to help fill in gaps in his prewrites
I’ll K.O. his bitch ass, while he looking for “stars” and strips.

^Also Good Closer' But Could Have Been Better 9/10

Over All... I Enjoyed Your Verse!!!

Vote: Deuce

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