atlas the vagabond
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IP:
first of 40caliberhitz, you are set for the underground scene lyrically, if you arent' already, you should be making tracks. but maybe you don't have a voice, who knows, but as long as you got flow and that excellent use of vocab, i'd like to here something from you.
40-has vomit flow, which is why he doesn't put ------these>// after lines, and i'm thinking maybe i should do the same because people don't seem to get my flow for some reason. anyway, excellent wordplay, very descriptive kill verse, greatly structured and flowed verse...
that lacked personals.
i treat everything as if it were a real battle(because i battle publicly) and if i were to see this i would've felt 40's verse on a lyrical level, but known that the disses were more exact and personal on SevenThirds stuff, so that's who i'll give it to.
SevenThird had good structure flow and metas, and PERSONALs, so i will go with seven third on this one.
but again i wanna hear something from 40 though.
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