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CounTREE Jay 2 28.57%
DeLeon 5 71.43%
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Old 05-21-04, 08:33 AM   #31
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CJ your not "Wack"....your just lyrically challenged//
sayin ya off tha "scale".....but your gettin kicked with my "New Balance"//


^^^ good opener...good wordplay


if wack rhymes was a crime.....Countree Jay would be on Death Row//
Chippendales the place he's gettin booked for a show//


^^^ lol...funny...im imaginin dat...good visual..uuuugh


Yo Jay.....heard when ya not on tha net...your softer than a hostess//
Next time put more thought in your rhymes and snap the fuck outta hypnosis//

^^ decent closer...

Deleon...wordplay seems to be something u hold down...wuz good here...this coulda been better with more multies and vocab...otherwise, 32/40 spit




Occupation: Killin' dis katz? Must be a form of Spanglish,
Nigga I was just playin' about you not speakin' da language/
To battle me you'll have to pull out every word you know,
But after shit, bitch, and fuck, you got a blank line to show./

^^ pretty good...it hits hard..but lacks wordplay

I always make Good on my M.C. hunting, so you can call me Will,
Wait till you choke on your bars, then you can claim Lyrically Ill./
Let me try my hand at Spanglish, Tu leave la musica alone hoy?
'Cause we know you ain't no True Thug- Enough said Homeboy./


^^^ Not bad...though, the mangled spanish you could have left out

um...good verse...wordplay doesn't seem to be your strength..but str8 hard hittin disses...good though...however, i place a premium on metas/wordplay...so I'm going with

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