this is how i rhyme similar when i hype myself out in the streets, is it any different than the battles in these forums?
need some feed back on this quick stuff

Yo.....Check it......

i apply logic, each rhyme more iller,hotter than an blonde chick
words intellectuallized, for more ooos when i bust this
i muffle, strangle my opponents, and make them suffocate
the asian magic make enemies choke, the concentrating evaporates
I get every cuz hangin on my words as if I was the pope
my awesome lyrical flow,confuses my opponent and have them mesmerized to choke
see homie, i wont need tactics to have cats lyrically blasted
so if clipse trys to step me, they'd lose to da fantastics(I've got clipse!)
I work out strategy, mathematically, accurately
I'm like a walking dictionary,use weird words and diss metaphorically
anyways, every battle i face I show affection
i show passion and aggression, for each and everyone of you cats still tryin to get the rhyming addiction!

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