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Old 06-14-04, 05:39 PM   #1
Crossword
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From: cNY
Failure

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Alright, This is actually a song i wrote... Im the lead singer of a band and i write for other bands as well as my own...


Why don’t you listen
I can tell all you do is hear
You are shaded from reality
And the pain I persevere
The Outcast cries for freedom
But no one’s close to hear
Our revolution will arise
Just wait… Wait for our time

Sell me your treasons
With the change of seasons
I kept my life tied down
Your poisoned reasons
I fall to my knees and
Confess what I disavowed

Desolate and Neurotic
As your words begin to tear
My arms covered in scarlet
Getting rid of this despair
Not understanding your logic
I’ll meet you halfway there
Our hopes have all fallen
You’ve failed… You have failed this time


The second verse is the chorus... i didnt set it up like the song. But you get the idea.. Feed back.
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