proof of acception *click here*

aight fa sho, rules are:
min 5 lines and max of uhmm 20 lines
i set it up and prefer u drop first
check in first then drop
due: sumtime today no exact time limit
no d/r
no c/v
no hate votes
no Unexplained
no bullshit... lol

Voting Critique (if not fractions!) should be similar to this! Copy and paste it... so ya don't forget... Plus EXPLAIN it, aight... gotta make it clear!!
opener:
flow:
multis:
vocab:
punches:
structure:
wordplay:
closing:
overall:

vote-

Unless y'all didn't notice ya need 100 posts to vote on this one... Let's do this! oh yeah good luck will a peer i mean 'Queen of RB'...
just blaze!!
MFG
~wun~


No show DQ

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