E Dubz
E never hesitates i'll be the first to clap at yo dome
you must be retarted, comin at me lackin a chrome*
chrome-dome....seen it comin. 5/10
cam wasnt made for this, sorry but your talent is too minimal
you couldnt make a ‘point’ if your whole verse was in ‘decimal’
nice wordplay 7/10
i will ‘precisely forecast’ ur loss like a ‘clever weather man’
name ur punches ‘Peter Pan’ cuz they ‘never never land’
good metiphore 7/10
like him ur living in a fantasy land this attack was never planned
im beating you hands down like im writing in a hand stand
OK metiphore. 6/10
ur unwanted like paparazzi grief, and hated like a Nazi chief
only time you ‘came in style’ was ejaculatin in ur Versace briefs
played but original. good multi's. 8/10
I think the nicest single verse I've voted on yet. No advice to give. Keep it up.
33/50

Killa cam
this nigga anit shit he just talk shit
came out his mama ass and he still a bitch
makes no sense. ass birth define's a non-bitch? since when? 1/10
you ether get down or you ether lay down
crenshaw a cross the chest i cant be put to rest
what? 1/10
iam the best and you anit shit
your rhymes cant comper to mine even on my worst day
again 1/10
so you better back down before you get clapped clown
i not playin with this fagott ass hoe now
yes you are. 1/10
gust what you is a thick ass bitch so go eat a mufuckin click
i smell pussy is that you bitch it must be because they say you are what you eat pussy
i eat pussy. that's a diss? -2/10
My worste verse I have ever voted on in my life. No advice to you either. Other than QUIT. Please. I'm usually up for constructive critisism but you just suck. stop. an unplug your modem. seriously
2/50

Vote/E-Dubz

Please hit up the battle in my sig wit an honest vote. thanks.

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