IMA BREAK IT DOWN.........



SPORADIC
This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
OK....PUNCH...OK WORDPLAY 7/10
Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
BETA WORDPLAY..DECENT PUNCH 8/10
can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
2ND LINE OK...6/10
taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
HAHA...GUD PUNCH...WUDVE BIN FIRE IF U HAD BETA SET-UP...8/10
Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
SHIT LINES R PLAYED BUT IT WOZ ORIGINAL...6/10


FUSE

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
2ND LINE OK...BUT THA FIRST U JUS GVE HIM PROPS 5/10
Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
BLAH...NOTHIN THERE...PLAYED PUNCH 3/10
in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin.//
WACK...VERY BASIC...3/10
you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
BETA WORDPLAY..STILL WEAK PUNCH 6/10
I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
PLAYED TO FUCK....NO ORIGINALITY 3/10

FUSE 20/50....played lines,hardly any wordplay...only thing decent woz flow,apart from that it looked like it had bin wrote in 1 minute....ELEVATE#

SPORADIC 35/50...good wordplay flippin off his name,although u did go on a bit 2 much on his name,u shudve done sumert else as well.
sum gud punches...id say set them up beta n theyll hit harder.....overall fairly solid,nice structure/flow.......decent drop

vote-sporadic

I FEEL YA 2 SPARADIC COS FUSE WAS LAME,U WON THIS EASY...N ANY DECENT MC WUD TELL YA THA SAME...