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RapMisstress 2 28.57%
DarkLight 5 71.43%
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Old 07-18-04, 01:22 PM   #16
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DAM NEWBS...IF you dont know what your talkin about DONT VOTE!!!

anyway...darklight nice flow..structre was on point...ive seen you come better...
punches hit ok..you had some personals that hit pretty hard..wordplay was good..
keep it up...

rapmistress...structure was crap..flow was off...

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thats how the sentences should be..it makes the dlow on point and easier to read
wordplay was ok..punches were weak...elavate

v/darklight
better verse overall..

DAM NEWBS!!!!
 
 


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