Met, honestly dont use the dots. Though you had a better flowing verse, that just makes it that much harder to read. You didnt have too great of punches, and honestly this was a extremley weak verse. I'd have to say, yours flowed really good, but did not really hit the kid too hard. Really soft shit.

thug. Now dont get a big ego, because your verse was not too good either. Was just a verse filled with played out punches and wack metas. The only punch that connected a little was the dreamcast one(but if i remember correctly, Sega SATURN was the worse system.) Anyways, Your flow didn't come close to metas, but you did have one alright punch.

V/Thug, for the only some what hard punch.

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