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Give Feed Back On This Im Trying To Write A Book And I Want Critisizm
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as a young male in this new generation of hip-hop i feel its for our betterment to realize we wll came from one man and woman and we all brother and sister
and dont allow the goverment to break us apart because hip-hop is the future and we are hip-hop. GIVE FEEDBACK ON THIS YOU STILL MY SISTER,YOU STILL MY BROTHER They say your nothing they dispise you say you wont never make nothing of yourself but you still my brother They say you rob and kill they say you stand on corners and sell posion wear baggy clothes and play dice but you still my brother She says your unfaithful you left your children in broken homes But most of us is from broken homes and we aight aint we? They say you white black and every race in between They tell you it will never last I love you cuz you tell them fuck what they think because no matter what happens you still my brother They say you hate yourself they say you hate them and even that you hate me but you still my brother They say you destine for prison they say you know nothing else they say you are institutionalized but you still my brother They use you and violate you they treat you bad not knowing the queen you are but you still my sister They say you stand on corners in tight clothes they say you give away that which is most precious to you but you still my sister They say you got children by multiple fathers they say you use drugs and alchol because you are weak but i know it is to ease your pain and you still my sister They say you cant hold your own they say you need a man to support you they tell you your not beautiful but your still my sister They say you dont love yourself but even if you dont i do and you still my sister no matter what they say
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