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08-05-04, 02:14 AM | #1 | ||
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check this out, lookin to elevate...
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hey, check this out, some of wat i was writin the other night tell me what i need to work on i havent written anythin in a while so tell me what i need to work on, its not a story or anythin i just write watever to try and get better wit words
them rhymes is shit on sticks compared to me/ lyrics will pull u from ya fake shit down to my reality/ and naturally,i see the only way for me to be free would be/ to take every emcee from bronx to long beach/ and not hesitate to show that i aint comin friendly/ My rhymes will bounce off the mic and burn ya hands/ the burnin liquid will eat at ya hands like the hanibal man/ ill beat u wit a dustpan till ya ears start bleeding/ blood will be so nasty ill call it anal leakage/ those "gangsta" rappers think they could rhyme u think im stupid/ they couldnt rhyme if their name was lucifer,behavior all elusive/ wit them stupid guns and ratchets/ ill be dammed if they come at me wit 2 automatics/ ill come at u with no suprises/show u i aint lyin/ i speak the truth/go against me ill bring ya face to my boot/ and shove it through the ground roots/ until the dirt clogs up into ya tooth/ u cant doubt this can cause an exodus/ have people wit slit,split wrists cuz they cant deal wit it/ ya mad cuz my rhymes is takin over u like the excorcist/ ya so embarrased ya face is gettin bloaded bigger then chris/ just some stupid shit, i still think its kind of simple,and would like someone to tell me wats wrong and wat was good and help me to elevate thanks peace |
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