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Old 08-05-04, 07:48 PM   #13
DeHotBwoy
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Come had better punches and a better flow


This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth
Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf
Nice 1 7/10!!
Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended
You put your life into this battle
.................................. so its only fitting you should end it
Good 6/10!!
Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet
Hot Shit 7/10!!
I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal
Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal
Allright 5/10!!
Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow
Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole
Nice Finisher 8/10!!

33/50


Raw Meterial nice personals but that dont just cut it


I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles.
Good But Strechted all lines Strechted 7/10
But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try,
Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die,
Weak 5/10
This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs,
And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com.
Weak 5/10
With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile,
I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child.
Good shit 6/10!!
You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten,
Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten.
Good Finisher 6/10!!

29/50

V/CoM
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