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Im spittin 16 in 1.
I spit, to make the mic like a flammable torch "It's understandable" my mind is a mechanical force And I'm a cannibal my mandible is chewin' ya corpse "I'm tyrannical, a vandle of intangible sorts Not a mineral a mammal or an animal, I'm. Metaphysical, the syllables in critical rhymes Flows blowin' off ya limbs like invisible mines Been invincible with rhymes since the biblical times A warlord with a sword from the Mongul Horde Speak the tongue of the lord, to bless my vocal chords They tried to resurrect hip-hop, but faith is gone So I'll take it over by force like Ghengis Khan If you say it ain't raw, you better pray to Allah Cuz I got an arrow that'll travel straight thru the jaw Got breath control, flow like a ship with a sail Divine when I spit, like if I sipped from the grail Cuz I'm immortal |
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