Voted For: ProVerse

wow, this was hard to judge but heres my verdict:
you both had great flow and styles all your own, both rode the topic well............
flow~your verse was good, you told a nice story type verse and nice rhyme skill as well, keepin it on track, nice job overall
Proverse~your verse was kind of short, but not short on detail and imagery with your words, nice job squeezing content into a short space,shows skill, i liked your ending and the rhyme scheme you used.............both did very well on this, much respect for you both, no hate whatsoever, i just love reading topicals, but i vote for^^^^

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