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thanks a lot for the feedback...but I am confused as how the subject matter is not consistent...the subject is rooted into a story of mine...and every line has something to do with how i feel about the story...emotionally or physically..or it is explaining the story.....I'm not arguing with you....I am just wondering what stuck out to you as "Non consistent"
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