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View Poll Results: Geuce vs. sHoTTaBoY
Geuce 5 83.33%
sHoTTaBoY 1 16.67%
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Old 09-11-04, 09:27 PM   #31
~Luciano~
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY


I lyrically bombard this wack mc with terminology from gods
Rob this cat from this win and rip his chances to defeat odds
5/10
My rhymes loft, and throw clips wit tongue twisting aerial deploys
Take my belt off, and let him get whipped let them kids in BabyBoy (Damn)
3.5/10 ~Bad Key~
Ironicly spit words that sent text battles up in flames
Tattoo his thoughts wit terms, so your mind will never forget my name
4/10
Nose bleed by venom lines like a lyrical handstand
I fill my bars to his lungs, making lyrical hand fans
3/10
Then again, I don’t need to spit hard to take this nigga’s soul
Cause I’m seeing through him, since my words left more than just a bullet hole
4/10

This drop wasent that great ive seen better from u
ya punches were kinda there i got the idea u was
trying to get across.. but were played and simple
use some complesity ya struc is there good there

Umm overall gave ya drop a 4/10

Mo'Fucka This Is The Battle TOURNAMENT..
I Aint Wanna Get Personal But I'ma Stick Yuh Head On My Wall As An ORNAMENT...
3/10
My First Oppenent Is G-DEUCE.....
I'ma Put Hollow Tips In Ya Tissue To DIFFUSE..
This Is Verbal ABUSE....
...I'm So TIGHT The Rhymes Got U Trapped In A NOOSE...!!!
4/10
My Seeds 11 An Yours Is Seven......
U My Nigguh n I Hate To Do This But They Do Say 'ALL DOGS GO TO HEAVEN'..!!!
2/10
Man, I'm More Deadly Than A Great White Clutchin A BAZOOKA..
So If The JabaJaws Dont Get Ya U Know I'ma Shoot-ya..
4/10
Bitch, U Wouldnt Be Hot Even If U Duplicate-Me..
..I'm Ya 'ROLE MODEL' n I Advise You To ''Tie Ya Penis Up n Jump From A TREE''..!
..People Sayin ''O Now He Bite Slim Shady''...
..Yea But I Made His Line Hot n This Battles Mine n Ya'll Want An ''ENCORE'' Like I'm JayZ..!
I Got An Uzi To Make Deuce Feel Woozy n His Mommas In Church Screamin ''O WHAT HAPPEND TO MY POOR BABY?!?!''..!!
7/10

Punches were ok ya structure wasent that good and ya complexity was ok i guess ya vocab was emmm more mediocore and ya open and close was ok

overall drop 5/10
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