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07-15-02, 02:48 PM | #1 | |
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-h£ñ & ñØw
IP:
It used ta be that when i asked u, u promised u would call//
U also said i was your everything, and to me u'd give your all// Well that was then and this iz now and baby its all changed// I started thinking, no longer dreaming and got my attitude rearranged// It used ta be i'd say things like "i'll be you Superwoman if u just gimme a Lil Mo// If you commit yourself to me, my love will erupt like an endless volcano"// Well that was then and this iz now and im not afraid to hurt you// I deserve to be treated better after all you've put me thru// But that's not the end, ladies and gentlemen, of this story i do tell// For that was the "Then" and this iz tha "Now" which actually turns out quite well// After our big fight, late that night i thought i actually got thru to u// I thought "Well if i yell summore, you'll think 'Oh god, what have i done, what did i do?// And maybe he'll figure it out, without a doubt, that his love he did not show// And from now on, he'll be more conscience of what then, he did not know// And despite his fake lies, i've come to realize, his priorities he did arrange// And for me, his love, his best friend, he decided he would change// Even tho he was scared, not wanted a broken heart to be repaired, his love he did not withdrawal// For he knew my love for him and his for mine was true and together, in love, we would fall// yo-if u noticed, the second half of my poem i went backwards wit da rhyming sound at tha end from "oo" to "oh" to "-ange" to "all" its like a reflection of da first part b/c it starts out wit "all" and ends wit "oo"--i did dat b/c it reflects my situation in dis poem--theres more but i'll just leave u wit dat. |
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