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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-02-04, 12:36 PM
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Feedback Granted:
overall was on the better half of the scale. ya said the word feel too many times. but thats alright, ya girl must've felt very special once she read it, ya have nice perception, and nice insight, i wish ya wouldnt have declined our battle, i dropped a decent topical, that would have gave ya a challenge to beat, bu eh...ya focus was internal: had depth and had blunt statments. more similies and metaphors and itll be an 'A' paper. thats verb's feedback. pz.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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