This is another verse i wrote in about 15mins, can you tell me what you think. Its just 17 lines, Thanks

Yo im introducing myself to the people in question,
People in the audience grab a seat class is in session,
With all the hate going down near me you would think id suffer from depression,
But here I am using hip hop here as a freedom of expression,
There is selected people I don’t like and others I hate with a passion,
Step to me and Ill hand out beats like there going out of fashion,
These people do nothing more than make me sick,
Worship some fucking bullshit garage and jump on their dicks,
But what do you people really know about me,
My name starts with a J and ends with an N,
Maybe you just talk about me cause of the fact you got a fascination with men, Cause Im like Triple H ill pedigree you lot by the mass,
The only pedigree you know is the stuff you feed your girls ugly ass,
But the only difference is im real, wrestlings fake,
Get yourself a new girl anythings better even a virtual date,
Cause here im like a bird dropping shit filled with hate,
Cause you’ll be a 39 year old virgin, getting none is your fate,

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By the way garage=a music genre in the U.K it sucks big dick